Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Mystery Character

He entertains millions of people around the world on a nightly basis. His strong, epic, and godly athleticism matched with his sleek, swift, and picturesque gracefulness allow him to dominant his craft. Not only a master of his profession, this man is an entrepreneur -- with many talents making him one of the most successful people in the United States. His ability to act, dance, and interact with people have made him loved by most. His distinct fashion sense gives all youngsters just one more reason to idolize him. He will go down in history as one of the greatest icons in history -- having mastered his craft at an astonishingly young age. His chiseled body matched with his boyish, yet determined face allow almost every person to pick him out of a crowd.

1 comment:

100w Prof said...

A little too much "telling" ... not quite enough "showing" in this description.

Give me more like "chiseled body" and "boyish face." Show me his "sleek, swift, and picturesque gracefulness," instead of telling me, by describing him in action.

8.5/10